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[NoMoshing]

This week, I desperately flail for something to say about the one aspect of game making I'm kinda sorta good at!

[GolemGaming55]

Look I don't do a discussion about every blog nomoshing

look from what I can tell your having trouble with writing, on the one hand you don't need writing to make a good game, nintendo's proven that XD
on the other hand after seeing alicesoft's 2dcg I'm kinda just playing this game for the story.

If you're having trouble with writing you could always play other hentai games and see how they write their stories and dialogues
Like evenicle, harem, evenicle, rance, evenicle, renryuu ascension, evenicle, glacier, evenicle,imouto paradise, evenicle

[HorseHater]

[Cazador]

You're not bad with funny / "sexy" / cute dialogues, small talk, this kind of stuff. So I guess you're mainly roleplaying light-hearted games. It's closer to Maids: The RPG than to Call of Cthulhu. Which fits with the overall "animu" tone of the game, so it's good.

You're way less good at "serious" dialogues. By serious I don't mean personal, but stuff like politics or philosophy. (Actually, you're not bad with personal / emotional stuff either.) You lack knowledge in these fields, and it shows. The Plato speech just before obtaining the Fate Ender bugged me to no end. (Especially the interpretation, which is kinda wrong.) Each time you dwelve into that stuff, it feels gratuitous and forced.

[NoMoshing]

[Cazador]

[NoMoshing]

[Manarkin]

I know this might be obvious or dumb, but I usually like to imagine characters just chatting about hobbies or new moves that they learned when I want to develop their personalities. It might help with making dialogues as well.

[GolemGaming55]

I want the main character to make more funnier dumb remarks, like making references

[Cazador]